Some people believe that confidence wins bigger games that knowledge alone cannot. Also, that accumulating knowledge makes no sense until one has the confidence to put it to use.
Is it true that knowledge will help one win a struggle only if it is put into practice with full confidence, or is it confidence without knowledge that is null and void?
In this modern era, there is an ongoing deliberation among people on whether confidenve level is more important in winning a problem. While some people arue that advantages of being confident on ownself overweight the disadvantages of being with high confidence level. On my point of view I think that Confidence, together with knowledge and past experience is required in winning a in a problematic situation. In this essay, I shall produce factors and evidences in strengthening my point of view.
First and foremost, knowledge is required to determine a strategy in getting through in a problematic situation. Apart from that, those who are with high confidence level take the challenges as opportunites and strengths. Beside that, past experience is required to creat an action plan in solve the underlying issue. For instance, if one person has undergone the similiar kind of a matter, and if he has solved that problem with his own effort it will be good experience and learning for him for his future life.
On the other hand, if a person is over confident on themselves without having the knowledge may take ineffective decissions which would even creat some other issues as well. As an example, if a person is over confident he will not listen to others and he will not be a good team player.
In conclusion, it is recommended to educate people to gain theoratical knowledge. At the same time, give opportunities to learn and come into a final solution by their own. It is also required to, train the younger generation in team building as well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 135, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...is more important in winning a problem. While some people arue that advantages of bei...
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Line 1, column 343, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...Confidence, together with knowledge and past experience is required in winning a in a problemat...
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Line 1, column 382, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... past experience is required in winning a in a problematic situation. In this ess...
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Line 2, column 235, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...pportunites and strengths. Beside that, past experience is required to creat an action plan in ...
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Line 2, column 373, Rule ID: KIND_OF_A[1]
Message: Don't include 'a' after a classification term. Use simply 'kind of'.
Suggestion: kind of
...f one person has undergone the similiar kind of a matter, and if he has solved that probl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, so, then, well, while, apart from, for instance, i think, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 31.9359605911 141% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 264.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90151515152 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90905145175 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57196969697 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 3.65517241379 274% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3926165188 50.4703680194 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5384615385 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.25397266985 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178054886929 0.242375264174 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549460243805 0.0925447433944 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389792432022 0.071462118173 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0967096327543 0.151781067708 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387006606382 0.0609392437508 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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