What is your opinion about top executives at companies getting their employees involved in the decision-making process?
In modern era, there is an ongoung deliberation among people on whether employees be allowed in decission-making process or not. While some people argue there can be lot of adverse impacts on allowing them in decission making, however on my point of view the advantages overweigh the disadvantages. In this essay, I shall discuss on my view while analyzing both the sides.
First and foremost, there are myraid of advantages that company can benefit such as employees tends to come up with valuable ideas to improve the effiency of their organizations. For instance, if an employee can suggest innovative marketing strategies to the company they can increase their income level by being competitive in the market place. On the hand, they will take the responsibility of implementing their proposal which will also add value to themselves as well. Besides that, it is also beneficial in personal development as well.
Nevertheless, there is a risk of information being known to the competitors. Therefore, companies have to ensure security of sensitive business information. For example, if a rival company can acquire such an employee, they get the implement the project before that company who initiated the project. Therefore, The confidentiality, intergrity and availability has to be considered with significant care by the top level management.
In conclusion, it is recommended to invite employees in decission making process together with their active participation on the workflow. It is also beleived that, companies can make small groups to achieve those goal through competition.
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...panies can make small groups to achieve those goal through competition.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 249.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42570281124 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21049612465 2.71678728327 118% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618473895582 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9743234112 50.4703680194 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.923076923 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1538461538 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2307692308 7.25397266985 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177997716814 0.242375264174 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582550416663 0.0925447433944 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510294566461 0.071462118173 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108737394321 0.151781067708 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432270134542 0.0609392437508 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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