What is your opinion about top executives at companies getting their employees involved in the decision-making process?

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What is your opinion about top executives at companies getting their employees involved in the decision-making process?

In this contemporary world, people are working towards their goals. Many companies give chances to the employees in the decision-making process but in some industries, it is only made by the higher officials. This essay is going to deliver my opinion on that in the following paragraphs.

Decision -making is nothing but, if any accident or incident made in the company it needs a sudden reaction from the chief executives of the company. Most of the authorities or partners are spending their whole day in the industry ironically the supervisor or labor always there only. If any need for an urgent solution it doesn't have enough time to discuss cause and effects to the manager or owners so, Employees need some decision making authority. Because they only have knowledge about each part of the industry. Moreover, it gives some appreciation to the workers.

On the other hand, some people misbehave this power to their personal vengeance. Chances of wrong order delivery to the workers are more. For instance, if the owner gives some work to the worker but the intermediate manager asks to stop that work. Workers are getting confused.

In conclusion, according to my glimpses, giving of decision-making power to the employee is the healthy one develope the company and also improve the workmanship

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Average: 6.6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 324, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
.... If any need for an urgent solution it doesnt have enough time to discuss cause and e...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 453, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...es need some decision making authority. Because they only have knowledge about each par...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1093.0 1207.87684729 90% => OK
No of words: 215.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08372093023 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80582720532 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609302325581 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.5308217176 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0769230769 104.977214359 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5384615385 20.9669160288 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.25397266985 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231307665282 0.242375264174 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695783703254 0.0925447433944 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626223024215 0.071462118173 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135771436985 0.151781067708 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564882016525 0.0609392437508 93% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 60.0 Out of 90
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