Do you think consumers should avoid over packaged products or is it the responsibility of producers?
In this contemporary Era, people are moving fastly towards their destination without worrying about the upcoming generations. some people are want their ordered food in a well packed way, but many of people don't need that it's also a producer's responsibility. I will elaborate my ideas on this topic in the following paragraphs.
Nowadays, producers or shop owners are eagerly ready to attract a customer by giving a free attracting gift of packing in an adorable pack without think about whether the pack is needed or not. But some cases needed extra packing for safety purposes - glass materials, mobile products etc... For instance, Mc Donels is an restaurant packing their pizza for the consumer's order, first they lay the pizza in a aluminium fossil paper and then covered by one cardboard box after that the box is put in to the cover and then delivered to the customer. costumer only eat pizza however the package thrown in to dustbin. so , these are the waste material.
This also a consumers responsibility, ever customer are advised to carry a bag or vessels to the shop or a hotel. but many people think that , lower their economic status. If the food or any product is over packed, buyers are advised to refuse to buy that products because it is waste of the product and the work has done to the product is also waste.
According to my glimpses, my opinion is over packed products are has both customer and owner responsibility.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, then, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1195.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 248.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8185483871 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67944207824 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576612903226 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.0547909668 50.4703680194 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5833333333 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 7.25397266985 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.33497536946 206% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149074732246 0.242375264174 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049041474713 0.0925447433944 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456669427939 0.071462118173 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0921678425682 0.151781067708 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559528197819 0.0609392437508 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 12.6369458128 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.5310837438 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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