Do you think consumer should avoid over packaged products or is it the responsibility of producers?
Do you think consumer should avoid over packaged products or is it the responsibility of producers?
These days’ manufacturer or supplier uses fascinating packaging to attract consumer. Consumer also
fascinates and tempting to buy over package products even though it was costly. As all you know over
packaged products are wrapped with multi-layer to make to attractive. Consumer does not know over
packaged products are harmful to environment. In this article, I will discuss my views in following
paragraph.
To begin with over packaged products produced by manufacturer, over packaged products creates
environmental pollution like it creates emission of CO2. For example, for burger packing McDonald using
2 layer packing. For wrapping the burger they are using paper and then they keep it in box. In place of
two types of packing they can keep the burger directly on the box so it saves cost as well as pollution.
Furthermore, over packaged products cerates pollution and also harmful for animals. To avoid this we
need to educate the consumers who is buying over packaged products even governments should
banned those products still anyone wants to buy they need to sell with double taxation so consumer will
automatically deny in buying those products.
In nutshell, consumer should avoid in buying of over packaged products which creates risk for our environment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Fascinates
...ng to attract consumer. Consumer also fascinates and tempting to buy over package produc...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...age products even though it was costly. As all you know over packaged products a...
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Suggestion: Packaged
...h it was costly. As all you know over packaged products are wrapped with multi-layer t...
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Suggestion: Packaged
...tractive. Consumer does not know over packaged products are harmful to environment. In...
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Suggestion: Paragraph
... I will discuss my views in following paragraph. To begin with over packaged products...
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Suggestion: Environmental
...turer, over packaged products creates environmental pollution like it creates emission of C...
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Suggestion: Two
...then they keep it in box. In place of two types of packing they can keep the burg...
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Suggestion: Automatically
...with double taxation so consumer will automatically deny in buying those products. In nut...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, so, still, then, well, for example, you know, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1196.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 219.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46118721461 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85822135742 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552511415525 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.4302201125 50.4703680194 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8461538462 20.9669160288 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.25397266985 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 14.0 4.12807881773 339% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.507214532009 0.242375264174 209% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.210269747444 0.0925447433944 227% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.255486642307 0.071462118173 358% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20826771418 0.151781067708 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.25153117935 0.0609392437508 413% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.