Experience is more effective and useful than books and formal education. To what extent do you agree with this opinion?
In this competitive era, experience is most effective and useful tool over books and formal education. Many argues that education plays a significant role over experience. They believe that if they get complete school education than they get the good job and respect in society. Other feels that education has their own set of value but experience makes people more confident and successful. I will give my opinion on experience and education in upcoming paragraph.
To begin with experience, It has enormous benefits over education. There is one good slogan in English, experience makes man perfect that means whatever you study, whatever degree you take but finally how you are going to encase them that is most important. That comes from experience only.For example, Our Indian Prime Minister Mr. Narendra Modi, he has a n good academic but with academic he has myriad experience of politics from RSA to Chief Minister of Gujarat to Prime minister journey. Their experience makes that confident and successful in their field and interest.
On the other hand formal books and formal education plays an important in getting job after that experience works in career. For example, our former Indian prime minister Mr.Manmohan singh has a good academics but he does not have any experience in the field of politics so he faces many issues running nation and taking hard decision in interest of nation. Society also not satisfied with his decisions.
in my opinion, experience is more effective and useful than books and formal education.
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also, but, finally, if, so, for example, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 5.75862068966 347% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 251.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23107569721 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63660751334 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553784860558 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.213525383 50.4703680194 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.25397266985 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304907570128 0.242375264174 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126105019763 0.0925447433944 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151976568771 0.071462118173 213% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256974346662 0.151781067708 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.183793179405 0.0609392437508 302% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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