Some people think law changes human behavior. Do you agree or disagree?
The government builds a law which controls human behavior through legislation. Many argues that law helps to control unnecessary things which happens publically. Law is something that forces the people to do such things which are beneficial to country. I will give my opinion about law changes human behavior in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, in Singapore there is law of no drug smuggling if some one found to do so he or she get penalized heavily and they come in crime records so police takes action against his or her. Also in India especially in Gujarat State liquor is banned. If anyone will find with liquor then they will get notice and penalized also because it harms to other if person drunk and drive so there is a chances of an accident so government has build a law to change the behavior of person towards these things. There are enormous benefits of law to control country.
Furthermore, in UAE kissing in public is banned so people will aware about this and they will not break the law any how. If anyone found to do kissing in public it will come in list of crime case.
In conclusion, no law in country has a detrimental effect on human behavior so it is tru that law changes human behavior.
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...nd they will not break the law any how. If anyone found to do kissing in public it...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, then, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1022.0 1207.87684729 85% => OK
No of words: 218.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6880733945 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49366253375 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 139.433497537 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550458715596 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 320.4 379.143842365 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1319388465 50.4703680194 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9090909091 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8181818182 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 7.25397266985 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287595004645 0.242375264174 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119686892321 0.0925447433944 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0890656059785 0.071462118173 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198729643697 0.151781067708 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0991709419582 0.0609392437508 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 12.6369458128 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.5310837438 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 55.0591133005 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 56.5 Out of 90
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