some people say it is better to be unemployed than work in a joy you dislike
to what extend do you agree or disgree?
One of most conspicuous trends of the today's world is the colossal upsurge in the statement that "Work in a joy".
There is a widespread that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in the world.
This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the above statement which relates to the fact
"Some people say it is better to be unemployed"is a pragmatic approcah.
To commences with, there are several arguments that favour of my stance. The most important one not only includes betterment of the society,
but also includes positive development of every individual planet. Because of the countless benifits, not only can one gain more when its comes to being successful and effective, but they can also
improve their efficiency, productivity, and quality of life with a great deal of efficacy and convenience.
Another crucial factor of aformentioned statement is that it is only to assist one to flourish, progress, and excel in a variety of discplines.
Consequently, only when an individual adheres to such a system they can expand their horizons skills, and acquire qualities such as commitment, dedication, and
perseverance. Hence, it is evident why many are in favour of the fact that "Some people say it is better to be uemployed than work in a joy".
Lastly, in my opinion is that government of Australia is taking a great initiative in educating citizens on a negative impacts of the statement that
"Disgree is better to be unemployed". Citizens are being encourage to fallow the applicable laws as well as rules and regulations foster peace, prosperity,
productivity, efficiency, and a positive environment in the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, if, lastly, so, well, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.5418719212 180% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 272.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32352941176 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28741439822 2.71678728327 121% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.0 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.931034482759 752% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4975423462 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.636363636 104.977214359 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7272727273 20.9669160288 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.12807881773 315% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150698828115 0.242375264174 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565580441907 0.0925447433944 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704463911251 0.071462118173 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0525604335615 0.151781067708 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0781858251763 0.0609392437508 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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