In many countries, good schools and medical facilities are available only in cities. Some people think new teachers and doctors should work in rural areas for a few years, but others think everyone should be free to choose where they work Discuss and give your own opinion.
In this competitive and innovative world good schools and medical facilities are essential part in each city. In India we can see that good schools and medical facilities are available in the cities only other village people lacking of these facilities. Many argues that it should not be like this, government should develop more facilities in rural areas also for that they placed new doctors and teacher in rural area to work for few years but other should think everyone should be free to choose where they work. I will give my opinion with instances in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, good schools and medical facilities are available in cities. In cities person reach one place to other place within an hour time maximum because of the public transport. All companies having their head office in cities so the population of educated people are high in cities and government is also developing it further. There are enormous benefits living in cities. Majority of educated people living in city and they develop it further. For instance, Our prime minister Narendra Modi working on projects for smart city and his more focus on developing more schools and best medical facility. government are forcing new teachers and doctors to work in rural areas in starting years which can help us in changing these area with new innovative idea and technology because those people are of our future which can change the world.
On the contrary part, we cannot force anyone to do something. Every people have their own life they can choose whatever they like. Government bodies cannot enforce to do what they do not like as everyone should be free to choose where they work.
In conclusion, everyone should be free to choose where they work, nonce can force on anyone’s choice.
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Suggestion: Government
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...ing years which can help us in changing these area with new innovative idea and technology...
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Suggestion: innovative
...can help us in changing these area with new innovative idea and technology because those peopl...
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... our future which can change the world. On the contrary part, we cannot force an...
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...we cannot force anyone to do something. Every people have their own life they can cho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 6.10837438424 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 300.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00333333333 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41608268806 2.71678728327 89% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516666666667 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.9 379.143842365 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1226817329 50.4703680194 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.066666667 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.25397266985 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.494418561584 0.242375264174 204% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141976404844 0.0925447433944 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144281194226 0.071462118173 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.31165462486 0.151781067708 205% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.162384187968 0.0609392437508 266% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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