In many countries, good schools and medical facilities are available only in cities. Some people think new teachers and doctors should work in rural areas for a few years, but others think everyone should be free to choose where they work. Discuss and give your own opinion.
Recently, the phenomenon of high level of education and medical facilities and its corresponding impacts have sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of rural teachers and doctors is highly beneficial, such an issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that collage and hospital accessibility can be a plus and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From social standpoint, modern educational methods can provide the society with some noticeable effects which rooted in the fact that the merits of online teaching, as well as far-distance education, are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered advantage of good schools and medical facilities availability in rural areas. Thus, beneficial ramifications of both freely choose possibility and less experienced doctors and teachers apparently can be seen.
within the realm of science, lack of medical care and facilities might increase the consequence of poor sanitation in over crowed areas. Moreover, fundamental aspects of disease would relate to this reality that the demerits of increasingly death alerts pertain children illness. As an example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of health programs is correlated negatively with infection diseases. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of amateur teachers and doctors.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of education facilities development and available medical care centers in rural and suburban areas far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of good learning prove the significance of improved healthy families, but also pinpoint long-term implications.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 382, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'facilities'' or 'facility's'?
Suggestion: facilities'; facility's
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Within
...and teachers apparently can be seen. within the realm of science, lack of medical c...
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Line 7, column 284, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to prove'
Suggestion: to prove
...only do the advantages of good learning prove the significance of improved healthy fa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1207.87684729 138% => OK
No of words: 289.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.76816608997 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15305236292 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 139.433497537 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664359861592 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 379.143842365 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6049181732 50.4703680194 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.916666667 104.977214359 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 20.9669160288 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157090727946 0.242375264174 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487358099924 0.0925447433944 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332806555149 0.071462118173 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0868284881302 0.151781067708 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272304294975 0.0609392437508 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 12.6369458128 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 53.1260098522 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.48 11.5310837438 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.16 8.32886699507 134% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 55.0591133005 211% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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