Nowadays TV has become an essential part of life, and a bridge to spread news and awareness and for some it acts like a companion. What is your opinion about this?
In last two decades television is a great invention and still not paused. In earlier days television with a black and white followed by colour to LCD to LED. There are enormous benefits of television. Television provide news, live telecast, lifestyle, food recipe making and other education related channels from which people can learn so many things. Television gives feel of tiny world around the glob.
Firstly, television become best companion to people. People watch tv serial, news and live telecast at home so they are not prefer to go out for entertainment like for movies, sports etc. Nowadays people are watching recipe on channels and they try to make recipe in dinner. Secondly, with television they get the information within fraction of second. Television become an useful tool for relaxing mind after stressful working day at office. It is also best option for children to learn new thing from cartoon channels.
On the contrary part, television is time wasting tools also. As people are using their maximum time in front of tv and they will not pursue for their favorite hobby like, sports, cooking, reading etc. Television makes people lazy. Family will sit together and watch tv but they not talk to each other so their relationship is not stronger with each other.
In conclusion, television is useful and essential tool if it used in minimal way.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 86, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...ention and still not paused. In earlier days television with a black and white follo...
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Line 7, column 21, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'become the best'.
Suggestion: become the best
...d the glob. Firstly, television become best companion to people. People watch tv se...
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Line 7, column 125, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'preferred'.
Suggestion: preferred
...d live telecast at home so they are not prefer to go out for entertainment like for mo...
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Line 7, column 372, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...n fraction of second. Television become an useful tool for relaxing mind after str...
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Line 7, column 450, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'also the best'.
Suggestion: also the best
... stressful working day at office. It is also best option for children to learn new thing ...
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Line 13, column 56, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... part, television is time wasting tools also. As people are using their maximum time...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1163.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 228.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10087719298 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51131633946 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635964912281 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5967845327 50.4703680194 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.6875 104.977214359 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.25 20.9669160288 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 7.25397266985 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120327599504 0.242375264174 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0377647097394 0.0925447433944 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409697713953 0.071462118173 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0684814901591 0.151781067708 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521715639816 0.0609392437508 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 12.6369458128 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 53.1260098522 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.9458128079 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.