Travelling to study is over-rated. We have brilliant scholars who studied locally. Is travel really necessary for tertiary studies?
These days many people believes that travelling abroad for higher education is beneficial for students growth. Some people thinks that study abroad students feel home sickness and they might not able to concentrate on study. In this assay I will discuss my views on travelling for further studies helps students career growth or not.
To begin with travelling abroad for further study, there are enormous benefits study abroad for higher studies. Firstly, In other countries student will come in contact with other local and overseas students and they will learn and respect different culture. Secondly also they will get expertise from different countries so they will become more knowledgeable. Furthermore nowadays employer recruit the candidate who is studied abroad or experience of working internationally.
On the other hand, travelling abroad to further studies student feel loneliness. Because of this they will not able to focus on studies. In other countries with studies students need to do part time job for their day to day expenses. For higher studies in abroad, some parents take a loan and send their child abroad for study and once their study gets completed they need to repay the loan till then parents and child both have burden and it may affect study.
In occlusion, There are merits and demerits of travelling for higher study in foreign country. My strongly recommendation is for better career student need to travel abroad.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ntries with studies students need to do part time job for their day to day expenses. For ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1234.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 234.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2735042735 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56296627244 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 139.433497537 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542735042735 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.9 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4722582531 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9230769231 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279737456966 0.242375264174 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127185548142 0.0925447433944 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0848347615859 0.071462118173 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211666971068 0.151781067708 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458039187314 0.0609392437508 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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