Travelling to study is over-rated. We have brilliant scholars who studied locally. Is travel really necessary for tertiary studies?
In this modern world, this has become a trend that students prefer to study abroad instead of continuing their study at their native country.
There is a segment of society which hold opinion that we have brilliant scholars those studied locally while other thinks that study abroad open new door for a student.This contentious topic has been profoundly debated on several forums. I will gauge both the views meticulously and give my opinion from a bird's-eye stance.
Throwing light on first view, studying at native place provides better environment to student because he is living with his family and it has its own many benefits.A student who is living with parents does not required to work to pay for his daily expenses. Moreover, students those live in their native country can learn subjects very easily as they do not need to learn new language. To illustrate, a non-English student needs to learn English if he wants to study in English-speaking country and vice versa.
Paradoxically, when a student go abroad for study he will learn more than studying at some local college because it provides him different surroundings.A student's personal growth is more when he independently faces the outer world. Furthermore, a student interact with the other students those are from different culture and learn about other countries.
To summaries, although studying abroad has its own merits, studying locally avoid lots of unnecessary pressure from a student which is very important for student growth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 244.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23770491803 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76200015451 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606557377049 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.9222552593 50.4703680194 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.0 104.977214359 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1111111111 20.9669160288 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 7.25397266985 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208174424741 0.242375264174 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941633068054 0.0925447433944 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814912392248 0.071462118173 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139020327038 0.151781067708 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435241005727 0.0609392437508 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 12.6369458128 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.1260098522 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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