Some people think that students benefit from going to private secondary schools. Others, however, feel that private secondary schools can have a negative effect on society as a whole. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In this contemporary era education for a child is inevitable. Because parents are having the dream to see their children as accomplished person. But some people make this dream as a business. Made more money from this private schools. Some people are in propensity about this even I am also. I will explain both the views and give my opinion in the following paragraphs.
Some people think that if their child is studying in a private school means it shows the economic status of the family. Private schools are the only who comes in forward to initiate and implement the next levels of study and they provide transport facility for the students even those who are coming from mobile village. And that type of institutions teaches the students how to behave in public and improve their personal skills by conducting orientation programs. Moreover, they give importance to both sports as well as studies.
On the other hand, some people think that it’s not only a luxury thing for a normal people but also it gives economic crisis to the whole family. For example, if one children’s neighborhood friend is studying in a private school, it creates unwanted desire into the children and it will affect their academics also. So for the secondary level education local or government schools are enough for the middle class people.
In conclusion my opinion is, instead of spending more money in the secondary education we can use this money to provide a better higher education. People are advised to choose the mode of study depending their income and whichever is best for their children
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: as well
... are in propensity about this even I am also. I will explain both the views and give...
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Suggestion: and
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...dren and it will affect their academics also. So for the secondary level education l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, second, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 269.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94795539033 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61408875385 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557620817844 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.5252447536 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7333333333 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9333333333 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.25397266985 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238257494181 0.242375264174 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791565632544 0.0925447433944 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490846901153 0.071462118173 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138478792423 0.151781067708 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358117968155 0.0609392437508 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 61.0 Out of 90
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