Successful sports stars and glamorous film stars are a role model for youngsters. Do u support it or not?
Now a days, people are want one role model in their life especially youngsters, it would be a sports man or a film actor to follow their behavior, attitude that is what they expressed in the film or in a television. Sometime its work positively and many time negatively.
Adolescents are easily adorn by the sports stars and actors because they saw their face on the television daily and noted each steps of their victory. Thus the reason they are inspired by the people easily. Youngsters compare their life to their role model and working toward is it will help them to meet the goal as earlier as possible. For instance, many of the actors got inspired by Sivaji ganesan in tamil cinema. Since new actors are learning from his act.
Moreover, they replenish their energy by watching videos about their role model. Inspired lot and more chance to win in the same field like their role model. For example, Sachin Tendulkar, a cricketer and he has broken many records in cricket. He is the milestone for a person those who are having passion in cricket for upcoming years also.
In conclusion, I totally agree with the statement. But even it has some wrong persons also but whom is our choice will decide. My opinion is, instead of walking alone in the life journey we can follow a known path that is our role model’s path. It is beneficial to achieve the goal without deviation within the short period.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
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...ision. Sometime its work positively and many time negatively. Adolescents are easily ad...
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Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1165.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 249.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67871485944 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41223421109 2.71678728327 89% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626506024096 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.8808487713 50.4703680194 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6666666667 104.977214359 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 20.9669160288 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.25397266985 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193096792313 0.242375264174 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494370572503 0.0925447433944 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498317450825 0.071462118173 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109019297273 0.151781067708 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418484821711 0.0609392437508 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 12.6369458128 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.1260098522 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 11.5310837438 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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