Many people think that successful people’s accomplishments depend on the regions they come from, while other people think that it doesn’t matter where a person comes from, if that person has the will to succeed, he/she will triumph. What do you think?
In this contemporary Era, people get accomplishments easily by their strive or by the knowledge. In that victory Regions also contributes but some people think that region doesn't matter for getting accomplished. It has both positive and negative views i will explain my point of view in the following paragraphs.
Most of the accomplished persons in the world are from regional part of the world. They got victory only by his hard work and the enormous knowledge on their field. For instance, APJ Abdulkalam is an erstwhile prime minister and chief scientist if ISRO - from one of the remote villages in india. Moreover he becoming famous only for his knowledge not by the region. After his victory only his region became more famous. So, success is depends on the work which towards your goal.
On the other hand, sometime regions will play certain in the victory of a person. For instance , Steve Jobs was a founder of APPLE company from the village in the U.S. But he becoming famous by his region's people buying his smart phone to encourage his business. And finally he became succeed in the business. So, the region also give some impact on the victory of a person.
According to my Glimpses, the region is not a reason to get accomplishment only hard work
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1048.0 1207.87684729 87% => OK
No of words: 218.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80733944954 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63031830396 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 139.433497537 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587155963303 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 379.143842365 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.897880856 50.4703680194 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8571428571 104.977214359 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5714285714 20.9669160288 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.25397266985 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230079514332 0.242375264174 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791215759304 0.0925447433944 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053125027404 0.071462118173 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132779222107 0.151781067708 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606481587845 0.0609392437508 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 12.6369458128 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.1260098522 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.9458128079 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 11.5310837438 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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