Many people think that successful people’s accomplishments depend on the regions they come from, while other people think that it doesn’t matter where a person comes from, if that person has the will to succeed, he/she will triumph. What do you think?.
Many people claim that, a person is what he associates with. This becomes true in justifying the fact that, some of the most accomplished personalities comes from certain regions. But, on the other view of the coin, the success is determined by the individual''s will power and attitude apart from the background place. In this essay, some of the reasons for regions and its influence along with successful people and some of the successful persons with good will power are explained in detail with examples.
Firstly, the region with good quality education, comfort, availability of good knowledgable resources plays a crucial role in determining the success. We could always see the successful persona in many domains comes from certain area where they always oversee many good role models from their own areas.
On the other hand, some of the most well acclaimed people come from poor and remote background with the help of greater attitude, hard work and perseverence. The famous scientist Abdul Kalam who was a farmer President of India comes from very remote place even without any proper resources.It is because of his will and mental strength, he had become the icon for many youths in India and across the world.
In conclusion, the regions always pave way for type of destiny for any individual based on its people, environment, education and many other factors. But, out of all, it is the will power, mental ability and strength and the right attitude always helps a person to the well acclaimed path.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, well, apart from, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 253.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00790513834 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57350804323 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569169960474 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.2941497326 50.4703680194 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.7 104.977214359 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3 20.9669160288 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 7.25397266985 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284863109659 0.242375264174 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118761875693 0.0925447433944 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552619659161 0.071462118173 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162806161375 0.151781067708 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068633099507 0.0609392437508 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 12.6369458128 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.1260098522 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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