“Normal” societal roles for women include taking care of the children in the household. But now that women contribute equally in outdoor responsibilities, it would be a little unfair to expect the same amount of dedication towards the upbringing of the children.
Is it okay for men to participate and share the responsibilities of the house and make their presence be felt more in their children's life, or should the mothers be solely responsible?
The advancements in technologies and globalisation have created a lot of cultural changes and awareness among people of all origins in these days. Earlier, women were the only responsible people for handling their home and family. But due to Diversity and Inclusion in many organizations, women are equally employed and shining in every organizations apart from home. This has created more burdens for women to handle both professional and family responsibilities. Hence, men also have to play an equal role with women at house by sharing their burdens for the right upbringing of their children. In this essay, some of the reasons and benefits of men sharing the responsibilities are exaplained in detail.
To start with, most of the millenial women face more stress than ever as the statistics report says. Due to increased stress levels of handling multiple tasks, not only she is getting affected, but also the upbringing of the family which in turn impacts the future society. Due to more responsibilities at office,it is difficult for the working women to concentrate on her children than ever before.
In order to overcome such problems, men in every family must also share their equal responsibility for the proper upbringing of their children. This reduces her pressure and ease the family situation.This also makes the kids to understand and respect woman in future.
In conclusion, the future of any country or region is always based on the present day children who must be tought well in their earlier age. It all starts from their home first where the understanding between each family members grows and built a healthy family relationship apart from reducing the stress level of woman in their home. Hence a healthy home is always based on a healthy women of the family which makes healthy society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, well, apart from, in conclusion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 31.9359605911 150% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 299.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09364548495 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88297030305 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531772575251 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 481.5 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5016429843 50.4703680194 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.785714286 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.25397266985 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137678607307 0.242375264174 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554478685058 0.0925447433944 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473005317935 0.071462118173 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849763725898 0.151781067708 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434998025752 0.0609392437508 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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