“Normal” societal roles for women include taking care of the children in the household. But now that women contribute equally in outdoor responsibilities, it would be a little unfair to expect the same amount of dedication towards the upbringing of the children.
Is it okay for men to participate and share the responsibilities of the house and make their presence be felt more in their children's life, or should the mothers be solely responsible?
The mothers play a vital role in human life, in some countries mostly women taking care of the children in household. Nowadays, women want to go for jobs and take our responsibility, it would be not good to expect the similar amount of dedication among the stripling. Moreover, men is also responsible for make less presence in their child's life. But women are more attach with children as compare to men.
Firstly, women care many things like house work, children care and job work and have many stress and they have no time to relax our brain. All day they do work specially children care men are not help to him to care children which is very wrong and the women have more burden as compare to men. Men do only an outside work which is important but house work is also important for men but they do not feel it.
Secondly, when the parents care about child the kids feel good because when only mother care about it so they feel father are not love them and feel upset. This is also good for children because when father care about the children the mother feel less stress.
To sum up with, the both parent are responsible for children caring and when they care partially children feel good and mothers feel also good. Every child can achieve success with the help of parents.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 45, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mothers play a vital role in human life, in some countries mostly women taking ca...
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Line 3, column 86, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun stress seems to be countable; consider using: 'many stresses'.
Suggestion: many stresses
...rk, children care and job work and have many stress and they have no time to relax our brai...
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Line 3, column 197, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'helped'.
Suggestion: helped
...ork specially children care men are not help to him to care children which is very w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1053.0 1207.87684729 87% => OK
No of words: 233.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51931330472 5.00649968141 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13102986616 2.71678728327 78% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 139.433497537 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502145922747 0.580463131201 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 324.9 379.143842365 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4361257513 50.4703680194 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7272727273 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1818181818 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 7.25397266985 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193496952036 0.242375264174 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919323383274 0.0925447433944 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069983398735 0.071462118173 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130071534222 0.151781067708 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0865765693726 0.0609392437508 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 53.1260098522 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 11.5310837438 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.58 8.32886699507 79% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 55.0591133005 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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