Tobacco, mainly in the form of cigarettes is one of the most widely used drugs in the world. Over a billion adults legally smoke tobacco every day. The long-term health costs are high- for the smokers themselves, and for the wider community in terms of health care costs and lost productivity. Do Governments have a legitimate role to protect citizens from the harmful effects of their own decisions to smoke, or are such decisions up to an individual?”
The issue of Tobacco, Tobacco is one of the most- widely used in the world. Over a billion adults legally smoke tobacco every day. Tobacco is slowing taking billion people in the world doom. The long-term health costs are high for every smokers who suffer from various health problem such as heart problem, lung disease and reduced concentration.
To Begin with, Some people think that tobacco and cigarettes is very harmful for health disease. People are aware in harmful products and government should many years, ill- effects and various health problems awareness among the people in NGO and local bodies to encourage people to quit smoking but the result has been not impressive. The solution is to nip the problem in the bud. School authorities and parents should keep a close eye so that children don’t start to smoke because they think it is “cool”. They should be made aware of the harmful effects of smoking.
The government could play a vital role too. Smoking should not be high-hand in advertisements and movie commercials which have a huge impact on people. It could levy high taxes on tobacco products to keep people away from its reach. Rules for checking children buying such products should be made stringent. Government should be banned these harmful products.
To sum up, as aforementioned, I think tobacco and cigarette is very harmful products who is used people suffer in various health problem. Government should awareness among the all people in the world and banned these harmful products
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, i think, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 252.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0873015873 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60434787729 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527777777778 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 379.8 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.1782759269 50.4703680194 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.125 104.977214359 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 20.9669160288 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1875 7.25397266985 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273271297243 0.242375264174 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103535149457 0.0925447433944 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121314543063 0.071462118173 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196482086404 0.151781067708 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.196301830631 0.0609392437508 322% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.1260098522 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.9458128079 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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