some people think placing advertisements in schools in great resources for public schools that need additional funding but, other think exploits children why treating them as a captive audience for corporate sponsors. Choose which position you most agree with the discuss while you chose that position support your point of view with details from your own experience, observations or reading.
The issue of advertisements, which has always debatable. but has now become more controversial. Advertising has become an indispensable part of corporate business. It helps to attracts potential customers to expands their business. For instance, some people argue that advertisements should be placed in schools whereas other opine juvenile mind certainly good idea to promote their commercial business
To begin with, Advertisements are good source of a funding for the public schools who always find themselves to manage their funding cash flow. Furthermore, Advertisements targets to child such as toothpaste and shower gel are using to helpful brings awareness children. For instance, children may enlighten about of hygiene and keep precautions their mind before eating something.
To the other hand, placing advertisements in schools will distract juveniles who do not have controlling power on themselves. School children might less concentrate on their study and more focus in colorful advertisements because of which their future will uncertain as they will not be able pass their course easily. For instance, a child who is in the habit of involving various advertisements since childhood.
To sum up, as aforementioned, every coin has two sides, I think advertisements is very important for every person because advertisements help in person many ways. Some people believe that advertisements is very helpful in human life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, so, whereas, as to, for instance, i think, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1226.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 218.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62385321101 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24635850326 2.71678728327 119% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633027522936 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.3762658418 50.4703680194 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.166666667 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.25397266985 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251693616307 0.242375264174 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789059365938 0.0925447433944 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601969888558 0.071462118173 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151042509324 0.151781067708 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0135914589367 0.0609392437508 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.02 11.5310837438 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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