Polygamy has increased widely in recent years .What solutions can you brought forward to decrease this issue?

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Polygamy has increased widely in recent years .What solutions can you brought forward to decrease this issue?

The issue of polygamy has always in debate, but now has become more controversial and decrease this issue with help of certain solution. I will discuss the how this trend decreases in upcoming paragraph before reaching any particular finale also with suitable examples.

To begin with, government plays very crucial role to decrease the polygamy, provide the good studies to every individual in every country is necessity because with the help of studies they gain knowledge about everything . Furthermore, the government also organize campaigns of awareness about one male or female should not marry more than one time. With the help of awareness campaign people get hesitate to marry more than one time.

In addition, government should pass restrict law or constraint about polygamy so no one will do this. When the person will do it then government should punish them or receive heavy fine from them . So the no one will break this law. For instance, in Arab countries every male has three to four female which is also effect on population.

To recapitulate as aforementioned, I think this solution is best for decreasing or stop the polygamy and people should follow them with the help of government sickness

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, so, then, for instance, i think, in addition, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1022.0 1207.87684729 85% => OK
No of words: 200.0 242.827586207 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69210451559 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 139.433497537 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 379.143842365 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6354808756 50.4703680194 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.2 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3 7.25397266985 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122757176836 0.242375264174 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567887132209 0.0925447433944 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651390222067 0.071462118173 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0967695896857 0.151781067708 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664269616257 0.0609392437508 109% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 55.0591133005 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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