Polygamy has increased widely in recent years. what solutions can you brought forward to decrease this issue?

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Polygamy has increased widely in recent years. what solutions can you brought forward to decrease this issue?

The importance of polygamy which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while other reject this notion. This essay will further elaborate causes and solutions of this trend and this will lead to a logical conclusion.

There are myriad of reason which will further explain this argument but the most preponderant stems from the fact is that polygamy is better way from those people who are detest from their partner as well as some partner are not happy with their relationship therefore polygamy is decline day by day. Another pivotal aspect for this argument is that same partners face financial problems in The their houses and some more trouble. Needless to say all these causes stand of polygamy in a good stead

However, there are some solutions that negate this argument and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of this trend but the most alarming is that polygamy is decrease by built strong relationship as well as partner should roam around in their city and town therefore their relation become more powerful. Besides, government should make some rigid types for those who make relation with other women as well as government should punish them from their big glitches. Hence, it is apparent why many in a favors of polygamy.

According to the argument aforementioned above, one can reach a conclusion that the causes of polygamy are instrumental indeed. Nevertheless the potential solutions should not be overlooked either.

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Average: 7.7 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 164, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...olygamy is better way from those people who are detest from their partner as well as so...
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Line 3, column 172, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'detested'.
Suggestion: detested
...is better way from those people who are detest from their partner as well as some part...
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Line 3, column 392, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'The' or 'their'?
Suggestion: The; Their
...ame partners face financial problems in The their houses and some more trouble. Needless ...
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Line 5, column 515, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a favor' or simply 'favors'?
Suggestion: a favor; favors
...ches. Hence, it is apparent why many in a favors of polygamy. According to the argumen...
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Line 7, column 129, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Nevertheless,
...es of polygamy are instrumental indeed. Nevertheless the potential solutions should not be o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, however, look, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, while, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17408906883 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6135037922 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 401.4 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.637441728 50.4703680194 203% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 142.0 104.977214359 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4444444444 20.9669160288 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.77777777778 7.25397266985 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153619947907 0.242375264174 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656912092861 0.0925447433944 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508073469243 0.071462118173 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10305659726 0.151781067708 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222024505459 0.0609392437508 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 12.6369458128 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.1260098522 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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