Companies use advertisements to influence people to buy things sometimes which they don't need. Give your opinion about this practice.
In the historical period there are not any advertisements to attract people. Moreover the television system is not available on that time. They only tell people about new thinks with mice. A typical day reveals company’s advertisements to influence people to buy things have been one of prominent topics in the contemporary discussions. Companies use advertisements to influence people to buy things sometimes which they don’t need. I will discuss both viewpoint of this statement.
Firstly, advertisement is very important thing in business and for company product. Moreover people can’t know thing that company introduce in market they always know it from advertisement. After those now days the film stars also doing this thing when their new movie will release in industry they first do advertisement. And also some companies give money to film stars do modeling for their product. Because every film star has lots of fans that follow them to when they do it people buy products what they are modeling for and use rather its needy or not needy. For example 60% products sell is high because of celebrity fans.
Secondly, doing advertisement is good for companies but not good for people sometimes the product was not good or it is not suits some people they buy and throw it. Moreover it is also wastage of money because when a celebrity does acting for a company the fans buy it always. Because they are dammed fan of that actor so they buy and keep it at home they do not use it. For example 30% people use that products and harm their body.
To conclude, I think that use thing if it’s suits you or your body
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 78, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...t any advertisements to attract people. Moreover the television system is not available ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 84, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...ng in business and for company product. Moreover people can't know thing that compa...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 485, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'peoples'?
Suggestion: peoples
...ans that follow them to when they do it people buy products what they are modeling for...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 165, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...uits some people they buy and throw it. Moreover it is also wastage of money because whe...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 269, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...es acting for a company the fans buy it always. Because they are dammed fan of that ac...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 20.9802955665 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 280.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86071428571 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71050253267 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517857142857 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 422.1 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0317361323 50.4703680194 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0588235294 104.977214359 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4705882353 20.9669160288 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88235294118 7.25397266985 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 2.91625615764 343% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382721765897 0.242375264174 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130788495098 0.0925447433944 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136820634123 0.071462118173 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242027050197 0.151781067708 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118254221186 0.0609392437508 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 12.6369458128 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.1260098522 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 11.5310837438 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.32886699507 86% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.