The claim that animals have rights has been subjected as a matter of debate since the 1970’s. Are zoos helping or hurting our animals? Should zoos be banned?
To the irrefutable to say that, popularity of extreme sports has continued to grow over last decades. People would like to do some dangerous sports like scuba jump, climbing ropes etc in our countries. I Inclined to believe that some people are participant in dangerous sports. This essay will be provide some advantage and disadvantage before participant some dangerous sports.
To the other hand, Some people are favor in adventure sports claim, The risk taking sports help in the development of self-confidence and independence of a person. For instance, by successfully facing up the challenges of adventurous sports like rock-climbing, young people overcome with their fears. Specially, going through a dangerous experience of them. The courage to face the harder their daily life. Furthermore, there is lot of fame and money involved in these sports.
To begin with, Opponent of extreme sports say that, being a extreme sports very dangerous and risky. If a rope breaks While climbing-jumping. For example, a participant will be very seriously injured or even die. Also, equipment needed these sports are very expensive. many people cannot purchase them which eventually increase the chance tragedy. Above all, youngster gravitate towards these types of sports could not concentrate to their studies.
In conclusion, in my opinion dangerous sports are many facts of human life. Some people cannot by expensive sports equipment and many students are not concentrate in your studies.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... their daily life. Furthermore, there is lot of fame and money involved in these ...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...onent of extreme sports say that, being a extreme sports very dangerous and risky...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...xtreme sports very dangerous and risky. If a rope breaks While climbing-jumping. F...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Many
...needed these sports are very expensive. many people cannot purchase them which event...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 233.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43347639485 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93748529096 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592274678112 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.5024630542 63% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6172938896 50.4703680194 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4705882353 104.977214359 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7058823529 20.9669160288 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11764705882 7.25397266985 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0303731357899 0.242375264174 13% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00955369201596 0.0925447433944 10% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0156073244462 0.071462118173 22% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0185424652353 0.151781067708 12% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0107415139955 0.0609392437508 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 12.6369458128 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.62 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.3980295567 69% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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