Some people prefer to be nocturnal during exams days and go through the entire syllabus in the last few days, Whereas others have regular habits studying little every day.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both the study patterns and choose which one is better way of learning?
It is true that nowadays, education is one of the most important factor in our country , without education is true that nowadays, education is one of the most important factor in our country , without education children do nothing in their lives.Whilst, some masses assert that children can always try to learn the whole syllabus in the last couple of days.Therefore,others believe that regular learning habits are good for the juvniles.Although,this trend could have lot of merits,yet its demerits cannot be ignored.I will shed light on my views in the upcoming paragraphs.
On the one hand, there are several reasons that nocturnal habits are not good for kids.First and foremost, if children can always try to learn the subjects in the last period, they can face lot of problems while reading and learning and also they cannot concentrate on their subjects properly.Moreover,they can always face lot of stress and worries while n children do nothing in their lives.Whilst, some masses assert that children can always try to learn the whole syllabus in the last couple of days.Therefore,others believe that regular learning habits are good for the juvniles.Although,this trend could have lot of mortis,yet its demerits cannot be ignored.I will shed light on my views in the upcoming paragraphs.
On the one hand, there are several reasons that nocturnal habits are not good for kids.First and foremost, if children can always try to learn the subjects in the last period, they can face lot of problems while reading and learning and also they cannot concentrate on their subjects properly.For example,recent survey new york suggests that children who learn the exams in the short period of time they do not attain the good grades in their subjects.
Nevertheless, there are plausible reasons that regular learning habits are very beneficial for children. The primary reason is that if kids do regular learning they do not face any kind of difficulties especially during exams days ,and also with the help of this, they can always attain good grades in their subjects. Moreover, they can always do each and every work in accurate way. For instance,recent survey suggest that kids who do daily basis studies they can always perform better in their class.
To recapitulate it can be said that no doubt, if children learn their subjects during last days they can face lot of difficulties.But if their parents motivate them to do regular studies then all the menace related to exams can easily be mitigated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, kind of, no doubt, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 7.85571142285 267% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2103.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 410.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12926829268 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16954513362 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.353658536585 0.561755894193 63% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 624.6 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 20.2975951904 251% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 226.581076825 49.4020404114 459% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 262.875 106.682146367 246% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.25 20.7667163134 247% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.25 7.06120827912 230% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117031558806 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679799545533 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350939891485 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0853727650035 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351489145115 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.4 13.0946893788 217% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 11.3001002004 195% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.1190380762 221% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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