“Normal” societal roles for women include taking care of the children in the household. But now that women contribute equally in outdoor responsibilities, it would be a little unfair to expect the same amount of dedication towards the upbringing of the children.
Is it okay for men to participate and share the responsibilities of the house and make their presence be felt more in their children's life, or should the mothers be solely responsible?
<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">In recent decades, both the partners are required to work to build a healthy and wealthy family. For this reason women are expected to do both the house-hold and official activities. Though they are capable of balancing both the acts, it would seem unfair for them to take-up the whole job while the male partner takes care of their professional life alone. In my opinion, it is advisable for both the partners to share the responsibilities equally for the successful longrun. This essay shall examine my opinion with real-life examples.
Both the genders work in the developing nation, to generate a strong economical and financial family and to meet their daily needs. In these countries, ladies takes care of the psychological needs of their kids and they also contribute financially to the family. Lady scientists in the ISRO are the best examples for this scenario. But it is always good for the other partner to show care and affection to the ladies of the family. Hence men should contribute equally to the needs of his kid.
Women tend to give more, if a husband helps his wife in the morning routine, this will make her happy and make her more productive. On a recent survey conducted by BBC, it is evident that the men who support his lady in his daily chores are considered to be the happiest.
From the above analysis, it is justified that men and women should take equal responsibility in nurturing a kid. This will make them grow brighter and they would also create an example in the society.</span><br>
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 265.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95094339623 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02029211689 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550943396226 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 408.6 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5567792871 50.4703680194 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7142857143 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 7.25397266985 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178348425386 0.242375264174 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594804899463 0.0925447433944 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400288010996 0.071462118173 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097519481445 0.151781067708 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457258390918 0.0609392437508 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 56.5 Out of 90
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