Some people think that students benefit from going to private secondary schools. Others, however, feel that private secondary schools can have a negative effect on society as a whole. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Surely there has been no time in the history where the lives of the people changed more dramatically. Some people think that private schools play a vital role. While other opine that, they have ample of demerits for the society. The following paragraphs analyze the inevitable reasons with a plausible conclusion.
To begin with, it's believed that private schools plays cardinal role as they provide a quality of education with best learning environment. Moreover, they has well qualified teaching staff which helps the students in their studies and exams. Furthermore, they are also able to provide facilities like canteen and drinking water. According to a research in 2013, most of the Indian family’s prefer to send their children in private schools.
On the flip side, Most of the private schools are expensive and it is difficult for some parents to manage the budget for their children education. In addition, there is very tough competition among students which can leads some students to stress.
To conclude, private schools are expensive and unaffordable for some students but there are so ample of benefits of the private schools which are unavoidable.
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... private schools which are unavoidable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, while, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 993.0 1207.87684729 82% => OK
No of words: 188.0 242.827586207 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28191489362 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.92707691288 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68061359131 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 139.433497537 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606382978723 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 379.143842365 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6904028394 50.4703680194 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2727272727 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0909090909 20.9669160288 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36363636364 7.25397266985 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21104028659 0.242375264174 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800408495361 0.0925447433944 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784620490421 0.071462118173 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142916246629 0.151781067708 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523233364064 0.0609392437508 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 12.6369458128 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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