Discuss whether design of building will have a positive or negative impact on people’s life and work.
Surely there has been no time in the history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on the typical day reveals effects of building structure on the people’s life and work has been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussion. People have always been intrigued to always and explain whether the positive or negative impact on people’s life. I will elaborate this notion in the further paragraph.
To begin with, the positive points of the structure of the buildings. Firstly, the good structure of the buildings helps the staff for doing work hard and with the full dedication. Like if any building have a good structure and the staff who do work in that building doing the work with full dedication and the structure of tower increase the confidence of the people who do work in that tower. Secondly, the architectural design also affects the people’s life. If the architectural design of the building is good and there is proper ventilation system then the staff doing without any difficulty. Staff does work in fresh environment if there is proper ventilation system.
Apart from that, there is another advantage is privacy concern. People do the work with the privacy concern in the good structure buildings. Staff does not get any difficulty of disturbance in the work.
In conclusion, we can say that if the buildings have good and proper structures then the staff does work with full confidence and full dedication.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, apart from, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 20.9802955665 33% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1263.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11336032389 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.855448108 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 139.433497537 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.457489878543 0.580463131201 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 378.0 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.6121644804 50.4703680194 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2142857143 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6428571429 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.25397266985 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365723292704 0.242375264174 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124415611202 0.0925447433944 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10479215996 0.071462118173 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206800652073 0.151781067708 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128936930074 0.0609392437508 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 12.6369458128 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 55.0591133005 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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