Parents should be held responsible for their children’s actions. What is your opinion?
Childhood is the golden age of the entire and blooming buds do all kind of naughty activities. But some children behave badly with their parents and indulge in bad activities. Considering this, some opine that parents should be responsible for their young one’s fault, while others have contrary views. The following paragraphs will analyze the inevitable reasons and this will lead to a plausible conclusion.
To begin with, it is believed that parents start shaping the child’s moral compass and character from a very young age. However, if the parents themselves are not good role models for their children, how one can expect that they will inculcate the values and morals in their adolescents. For instance, according to 2013 statistics, in America most offence were made by juvenile belongs to a criminal family. Moving further, parents should be meticulous about the company of friends of their children.
On the flip side, although some parents take care of their children on a large scale yet, their children may move towards the bad company. In addition, apart from parents influence, Pubescent are also affected by the company of their teachers, peers and neighbors.
To conclude, should not be solely blamed and punished for their children’s actions and there are myriad other factors which cannot be ignored at all. So, parents should be held responsible for the certain cases only.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, while, apart from, for instance, in addition, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1195.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 227.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26431718062 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65545603581 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651982378855 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.6398857462 50.4703680194 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.5833333333 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9166666667 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.25397266985 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.426735294139 0.242375264174 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156313761934 0.0925447433944 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115360240107 0.071462118173 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272063581984 0.151781067708 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0909791056617 0.0609392437508 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.