Some people believe the large shopping malls are replacing local shops which is bad for local economies. What is your opinion?
As times have continued to change so has the nature of buildings that are coming up to accommodate the new trend which is the shopping malls. Smaller shops are becoming fewer day by day been overtaken by the malls. I think the two can co-exist if each person stays afloat to survive in whatever business he is dealing with.
Shopping malls are generally frequented by mostly the high-end people and the middle class, hence seen to be out of reach by people of lower incomes. With the increasing population of the middle class so is the is the number of people who visit to malls, be it to sight see and make future plans of what they will buy based on what they see. Shopping malls bring with them convenience, as everything can be found at one go in a building. This is in terms of beauty shops, clothing shops, supermarkets and banks. In some malls there are also two or more shops that venture into the same idea for example clothes, or shoes with this type of shops, it brings about alternatives in people's purchasing power as they can quickly compare prices hence making an informed decision on what to buy and at what costs.
The shopping malls also create employment opportunities as many people are employed to check on the security, cleanliness of the malls, as well other people who bring entertainment items for kids to enjoy themselves with. with the ever-increasing busy schedules of people. The malls save on time as everything is found at one go within the vicinity.
With the small shops, they still cater for the other people who will only go to the malls to window shop and maybe create an idea of what they would like to have in the future. People who frequent the shops have bargaining power with the shopkeeper and get to the extent of taking items on credit as they create a bond between an individual with the shopkeeper. The small shops are there for people who want to buy the quick items without having to go to the malls.
In conclusion, in my opinion the two will be of great benefit to the population depending on who frequents the other, hence replacing one for the other might end up hurting a portion of the population.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, may, so, still, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 31.9359605911 216% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1207.87684729 148% => OK
No of words: 388.0 242.827586207 160% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59793814433 5.00649968141 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 3.92707691288 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49147766228 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 139.433497537 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494845360825 0.580463131201 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 541.8 379.143842365 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.9597857284 50.4703680194 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.933333333 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8666666667 20.9669160288 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 7.25397266985 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234217891821 0.242375264174 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08300115226 0.0925447433944 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549482003086 0.071462118173 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127323375713 0.151781067708 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437752657055 0.0609392437508 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 53.1260098522 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 11.5310837438 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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