Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion about this? Discuss with appropriate examples
In this fast-pace world, shopping malls are like skyscrapers to implement a variety of shops in one place. It has both numerous benefit and drawback and some people think that it should affect the local merchants. I will explain the both views in the following paragraphs.
Nowadays, people wanted to purchase their desired items as well as needed items in one place because of lack of time availability and to avoid the drift for the shopping on referring various shops to buy things. Because in this congested traffic world parking for a vehicle is also a problem. But the shopping malls are having a parking facility by it's own. So, park a car in one place and can buy everything in one building is beneficial for human. Moreover they announce offers for the exclusive branded products frequently that is also favourable to the customer. For instance, as per the survey taken by the NGO's most of the people are purchasing only in the malls during any occasion.
If on the one hand shopping malls has led to the economic growth and useful for upper middle-class and lavish people, on the other hand it gradually replace the small shops. People are attracted by those shopping malls and they not even consider the small shops. Thus the shops are in endemic stage. When compared to supermarkets, small shops has less variety of products but those are good in quality and we can bargaining the rates according to the product but in malls only the fixed price and the taxes are exclusive. If purchasing in the small shops will help the small merchant into their business development. Moreover, in malls, people are tempt to buy a unwanted things cause their pockets empty.
To reiterate according to glimpses, to develop a local economy and want to see a known person’s growth small shops are the best for shopping instead of attracting by a false discount in the malls.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Moreover,
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Message: Did you mean 'replaces'?
Suggestion: replaces
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Suggestion: Thus,
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'bargain'
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...ut those are good in quality and we can bargaining the rates according to the product but ...
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...ixed price and the taxes are exclusive. If purchasing in the small shops will help...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for instance, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1207.87684729 129% => OK
No of words: 324.0 242.827586207 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81172839506 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 3.92707691288 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57273961027 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 139.433497537 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521604938272 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 479.7 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3144418525 50.4703680194 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4375 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.25397266985 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199272738736 0.242375264174 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704960947512 0.0925447433944 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063545731591 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120540931228 0.151781067708 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597898433447 0.0609392437508 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 12.6369458128 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.5310837438 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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