Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion about this? Discuss with appropriate examples.
Ever since the twenty-first century took place, there has been a colossal upsurge in the debate of large shopping malls. Some intellectuals assert that it is very beneficial, while other say that it has many loopholes. The point of contention is described hereunder to form a plausible stance.
To set the wheels into motion, there are multifarious glaring and reinforced rich rewards of large shopping malls, which act as an avid proponents. Primarily, the most evident and distinctive one stem from the fact is that all provisions are available at under one roof and we do not have to go anywhere else to buy other things. That saves us a lot of time if you are living in a metropolitan city, you may be aware of traffic now days it getting worse and gravely worse each and every day.
To put more emphasis on it, all the provisions and other items can be available in wholesale rates and it is cheaper to buy from large shopping malls becausevthey buy these items directly from the companies and there is no middleman between him. So its quality will be flawless and very rich. Finally, everyday we got from news channel that a bogus company are making fake produts in market. Because they are buying in bulk from the campanies. It is sure that the product you are buying 100 percent original.
To encapsulate, after the pinpointing and bolstering all the points above it is clear buying provisions from large shopping malls can save you time, money and they have good quality items.
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Suggestion:
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...pany are making fake produts in market. Because they are buying in bulk from the campan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, may, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 260.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77692307692 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60013654626 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7538353023 50.4703680194 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 7.25397266985 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0767030115232 0.242375264174 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0249936420494 0.0925447433944 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356070503453 0.071462118173 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0528071964539 0.151781067708 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206760937416 0.0609392437508 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 11.5310837438 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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