Some people prefer to spend their holidays in resorts where everything is organized for them and they take little interest in the country they are visiting. Others prefer to travel around the country and to see how the people live, to get to know their customs and traditions and cuisine. Write an essay on which type of foreign travel you think is best for both the tourist and the local community.
Choose which position you most agree with and discuss why you chose that position. Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading
Few individuals choose to celebrate special occasions in recreational centers by availing package tours while showing disinterest to the tourist place. However, other people would desire to visit overseas and learn the locals' cultures and food. In my point of view, I support the latter argument due to an opportunity to widen horizon and to appreciate another nation culture. This essay will discuss my justifications for the stated reasons.
To begin with, human beings always go after the things they enjoy most. One of which is to travel and explore the wonders of different countries. As a result, they may able to broaden their knowledge and can view the world in new perspective. For example, learning new languages as part of other nation's culture can beneficial to the traveling individual through gained information and can be shared to his community.
Apart from this, the fact that people can recognize the country's way of living and be grateful about it can contribute to encouraging more tourist to visit the same site. Consequently, it would lead to economic gain for the particular city. To illustrate, shared experiences after visiting Japan would call for the attention for other wanderlust and eventually improve their tourism industry.
To recapitulate, people should grab the opportunity to visit certain countries by learning their customs and also to acknowledge their way of life. In this way, it would benefit the entire region in terms of growing tourism and its economy.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, may, so, while, apart from, for example, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 242.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23553719008 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79267008711 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644628099174 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3211628281 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4615384615 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6153846154 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.25397266985 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175381021166 0.242375264174 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055659288286 0.0925447433944 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486095265468 0.071462118173 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103037643436 0.151781067708 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034507653228 0.0609392437508 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 82.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 74.5 Out of 90
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