Some people suggest that each family should have one car and not encourage alternative vehicle. Give your opinion.

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Some people suggest that each family should have one car and not encourage alternative vehicle. Give your opinion.

Surely there has no time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on the typical day reveals family should have one car has been one of the prominent topics on the contemporary discussion. People have always been intrigued to analyze and explain family should have one car and not encourage alternative vehicle. I will discuss reason behind this notion in further elaborating paragraphs.
To begin with, there are enormous reasons about this argument. Firstly, family should have one car because only one car have enough for family members for purpose of traveling and others purpose. Secondly, car is a that type of vehicle which have more space for travel person which contains one to five people at one time so only one car have better for each family. Moreover, people have bought more cars if they have no need so it is the wastage of money where it decline the financial infrastructure into family.
In addition to it, if each family should have one car which have save usage of fuel in large amount. Moreover, numbers of cars create congestion on roads as well as air pollution so each family should have one car which they can save the environment.
In conclusion, in my point of view each family should have only one car because it save the money as well as reduce the congestion on roads and decline the environment pollution.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ve no need so it is the wastage of money where it decline the financial infrastru...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1150.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 239.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81171548117 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51792474649 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510460251046 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.0 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3170155689 50.4703680194 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.545454545 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7272727273 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0909090909 7.25397266985 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.435030481617 0.242375264174 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.195092860248 0.0925447433944 211% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130147850528 0.071462118173 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.295287166852 0.151781067708 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588654583138 0.0609392437508 97% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.5310837438 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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