Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned while others disagree. Do you agree or disagree? State your opinion and support it with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations.
Extreme sports such as parachuting, bungee-jumping and scuba-diving have burgeoned to become popular activities today. Some people think that they are good sports for a stronger personality, while others argue they are very dangerous and harmful. I am inclined to believe that these sports are in fact dangerous and they should not be promoted.The following paragraphs will analyze their inevitable dangers and suggest other better sports for people to participate.
First of all, extreme sports are dangerous and risky. These forms of sports generate high levels of risks and there are always chances of unfortunate events that will happen. For example, there have been a number of youngsters who died from participating in scuba-diving in Texas. Specifically, a research study conducted by Yale University in 2014 has found nearly 4000 cases of injuries from extreme sports in the USA alone.
Second of all, there are a variety of other forms of sports that are just as exhilarating and interesting as extreme sports for people to play. They not only are safer but also bring to players a feeling of relaxation and entertainment. As an example, sports such as tennis, football and horse-racing are tremendously fun to play and also safe.
In conclusion, the foregoing discussion propounds the view that extreme sports are indeed dangerous and there are many other safer types of sports that people should participate in instead. It is expected that people take cognizance of this fact and further, the governments must establish guidelines to educate people about the aforementioned.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 252.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32936507937 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96339843502 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563492063492 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7980428835 50.4703680194 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.916666667 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.25397266985 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199154413232 0.242375264174 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740107242679 0.0925447433944 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592564442303 0.071462118173 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122997620637 0.151781067708 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501892296982 0.0609392437508 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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