Some people think that, it is better to teach girls and boys together. What is your opinion about this? Discuss.
Now in the modern era, many people think that it is better to teach boys and girls together in same schools and colleges. While some believe that it is not good way to teach together. I will shed light on both view with my own opinion before proper conclusion.
On the one hand, some people think that better way to teach the students is teach together because in some country there is racism which is not good for students as well as for common people. When, both girls and boys are study together it is good for them because they gain more knowledge and know about each other.
On the other hand, many people believe that to teach girls and boys together is not important because it is not good for girls. In some parts of the earth individuals think that girls cannot study more than boys. For instance in some parts of India , like in Rajasthan the parents marry the girls in the age of 12 to 15 which is very bad for them and they have no opportunity to exposure.
To recapitulate, I opine that to teach boys and girls in same school or college is good because it is good for future of both genders in terms of confidence and understanding with each other.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... together in same schools and colleges. While some believe that it is not good way to...
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...oys. For instance in some parts of India , like in Rajasthan the parents marry the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, well, while, as for, for instance, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 1207.87684729 79% => OK
No of words: 217.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38248847926 5.00649968141 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20004227488 2.71678728327 81% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 139.433497537 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47465437788 0.580463131201 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 291.6 379.143842365 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.57093596059 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5103201079 50.4703680194 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.666666667 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1111111111 20.9669160288 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 7.25397266985 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285994077397 0.242375264174 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135340380878 0.0925447433944 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680218152538 0.071462118173 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191282693925 0.151781067708 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717887286793 0.0609392437508 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 53.1260098522 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.42 11.5310837438 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.72 8.32886699507 81% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 55.0591133005 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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