Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that develop the mind, such as reading and doing crossword puzzles, other people feel it is important to rest the mind during leisure time. Discuss your opinion.?
It is irrefutable to say that with the change in the lifestyle has forced people into too much work and less time for leisure. Some believe that free time should be utilized by engaging in mental development while other prefers to rest the brain and do nothing productive. I prefer utilizing leisure time and doing things what one wants at that particular time; that is, combination of rest and mental exercise which will be discussed in this essay.
To begin with, long working hours proliferate the chances of psychological instability in myriad people. Having peaceful environment with adequate rest at a vulnerable period of mental stress might be beneficial to the health of individual. According to WHO, for instance, for every 2 hours of rigorous mental work 15 minutes of rest is necessary which resuminates mental capacity and decision making and enhances overall capability of human brain.
People on the other side of fence assert that the time humans can devote to tedious mental work is limited so for making full utilization of it by exercising different games and memory boosting task will give one the power assimilate different aspect of human life. Moreover, those tasks at leisure time give individual ability to ace at work as it develops competitive environment and concentration.
To recapitulate, leisure time in this age is difficult to get and it differ from person to person what they prefer so it is necessary to utilize it properly to proliferate human life is necessary
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, while, as for, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1256.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 248.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06451612903 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80533904532 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592741935484 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.7120995602 50.4703680194 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.555555556 104.977214359 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5555555556 20.9669160288 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.25397266985 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201276750441 0.242375264174 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873584360366 0.0925447433944 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555148730439 0.071462118173 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122404488976 0.151781067708 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790060742477 0.0609392437508 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 12.6369458128 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 53.1260098522 67% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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