Study needs time, peace and comfort and whereas employment needs same thing. Some one says it is impossible to combine those two because one distracts one another. Do you think this is realistic in our life today?
This is the era of learning and knowledge in which everyone wanted to get higher education. Study with work is most trending nowadays. Some students prefer to do work with their studies and some only want to focus on their study to get desire score. It is very hard for anyone to handle both work and study at side by side because to become expert in any field, proper time and attention towards that is very important. In my opinion study with work is hard but more beneficiary too.
To become expert in any field, we need to spent time on it. It is very hard for someone to get success in study and work both, because both require time to get successful. For example, if full time student who work for part time, it is very hard to give attention on their study and score high. On other hand any students who only study can give more time to study and it helps to become expert in his field.
Study and work side by side can improve potential and efficiency. Most of the companies prefer employees who work with study because they are more efficient and have more power to handle any difficult situation as well. It makes students proactive in nature. The main reason is that experience of work in hard situation can make a person more potential. And it makes any person more independent for their financial need too. According to a Research of University of Sydney, 76% of their students do work with their higher education.
In conclusion, both sides have their benefits and drawbacks too. It is totally depends on strong willingness of any person. In my opinion work with study can makes person more efficient.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: fulltime
...time to get successful. For example, if full time student who work for part time, it is v...
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Suggestion: part-time
...mple, if full time student who work for part time, it is very hard to give attention on t...
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Suggestion: Research
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Suggestion:
...ts do work with their higher education. In conclusion, both sides have their ben...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'make'
Suggestion: make
...rson. In my opinion work with study can makes person more efficient.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 31.9359605911 144% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 291.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61855670103 5.00649968141 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34059722929 2.71678728327 86% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 139.433497537 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.436426116838 0.580463131201 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 429.3 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9461617313 50.4703680194 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.6666666667 104.977214359 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 20.9669160288 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.25397266985 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0963647426402 0.242375264174 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373695667766 0.0925447433944 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0284263044091 0.071462118173 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0655882008443 0.151781067708 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352752423777 0.0609392437508 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 12.6369458128 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.1260098522 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 11.5310837438 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.32886699507 85% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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