For a successful company, selling products depends more on company's reputation or it depends more on if they provide discount and free offers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, the phenomenon of company’s discount has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the world, which leads to a moot question “whether selling products for a successful company depends on its reputation or providing a discount?”. It is a widely held view that providing free offers is highly beneficial, whereas I tend to believe that one must weigh up carefully the pros and cons of this issue.
To begin with, it is a common belief that considering a discount for products plays a vital role in the world of cut-throat competition. Therefore, I express several reasons why I support this idea. First and foremost is that short-term discount makes the companies boost up their revenues to grow the productions. Secondly, it can be argued that discount provides potential buyers with appropriate circumstances to purchase their basic needs with reasonable price. In addition to this information, it should be mentioned that not only the companies increase their earning capacity but also they are able to achieve popularity among consumers. A very tangible example to illustrate would be China that presents an extensive range of merchandise at a lower price all over the world.
However, undoubtedly free offering provides people with various negative points. It should be taken into account that the majority of these goods are flashy and without enough quality or durability, so potential buyers are convinced to buy the product without knowing them. Moreover, a large amount of money is spent on advertisement and the announcement of discount by the companies.
To recapitulate, I entirely agree that free offers or discount can be the most important contributors to successful companies. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce stricter legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 64, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...n of company's discount has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1207.87684729 134% => OK
No of words: 299.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40133779264 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10917371976 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 139.433497537 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635451505017 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 379.143842365 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4820549287 50.4703680194 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.230769231 104.977214359 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.25397266985 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216719580173 0.242375264174 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063764300301 0.0925447433944 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786143481224 0.071462118173 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124555058873 0.151781067708 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0865602590915 0.0609392437508 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 55.0591133005 169% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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