Team sports are generally promoted as a great way to keep fit and build character. However, sporting events such as soccer matches are often accompanied by violence between rival supporters and other forms of antisocial behaviour. If sporting events cause antisocial behaviour, can team sports really be good for us?
Team sports have become an interesting subject for mass media because of the debate it can spark. There are some who feel that team sports are not good because of the antisocial behaviors during and after the matches. However, I feel that there are many advantages which can outweigh disadvantages. In following paragraphs, I would discuss my viewpoints on this subject.
To start with, sports make us healthy not only mentally but also physically. Team sports have further special benefits related to it. Firstly, an individual will have to play with a team. While playing with the team, he or she can learn to become social and outwards. Secondly, it can build team spirits amongst them which is very important for community building. Finally, playing with a group can bring a person out of his comfort zone.
From the perspective of the society, sports like the soccer and the cricket bring people close. When such matches are organized locally or internationally, people from all over the world come together forgetting their anger and sorrows. Such behavior brings one kind of patriotism amongst the citizen of the one country.
However, this patriotism can bring antisocial behavior with them. For instance, sometimes supporters of a team mock the members and supporters of the rival team. If this behavior inculcated in youngsters, it can take the dangerous foam if not stopped by parents and peers.
To wrap up, team sports have many benefits and good for us. Although they can cause antisocial behavior during and after matches, it can be handled by strict rules and regulations and players can also ask their fans to respect rival teams as well.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, i feel, kind of, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 276.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04347826087 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60986286287 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594202898551 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.325123152709 308% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0599361536 50.4703680194 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3333333333 104.977214359 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 20.9669160288 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 7.25397266985 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18955129854 0.242375264174 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644850963186 0.0925447433944 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483642102348 0.071462118173 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109972123266 0.151781067708 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.011955224122 0.0609392437508 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 12.6369458128 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.1260098522 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.9458128079 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.36 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.32886699507 90% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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