technology effecting individual and society.do you agree?
These days, there is a controversial debate between members of society about the impacts of technology on individuals and society. There are a great number of people who interpret the impacts of technology as thoroughly constructive, while others hold an opponent view. I am inclined to believe that technology is beneficial for people and also has positive effects on society.
There are several reasons why technology is advantageous for individuals and society. First of all, it is argued that technology plays pivotal role in creating adroit people. This is attributed to the fact that technology provides everyone to communicate with others around the world and they would be able to share their information about their cultures, therefore they would create a feeling of accomplishment and competence, which consequently open avenues to new achievements so that the individual's enthusiasm and determination would be amplified towards many daunting tasks. Take Kenya for example, even old people in this country are now aware of some negative impacts of some depraved costumes such as old style of marriage.
In addition, it is claimed that technology would lead to economic prosperity of a people and society. This is to say that new business opportunities such as online shopping malls have shown up during recent years due to the advancements in technologies, which would create a myriad of job positions so that people have the chance to do up to expectations in society. Specifically, a research study conducted at Yale University in 2015 has found that technology would enhance the people's intellectual abilities to make better decisions related to social and personal life.
To recapitulate, the foregoing discussion propounded the view that technology would enhance the quality of life in a community and would increase the people's confidence. It is expected that governments take cognizance of these facts and start to adopt the use of state-of-the-art technology.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 493, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...avenues to new achievements so that the individuals enthusiasm and determination would be a...
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Line 7, column 151, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...e in a community and would increase the peoples confidence. It is expected that governm...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he use of state-of-the-art technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in addition, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 5.94088669951 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 31.9359605911 147% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1207.87684729 139% => OK
No of words: 311.0 242.827586207 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41479099678 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14535201801 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 139.433497537 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569131832797 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 379.143842365 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.93412149 50.4703680194 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.333333333 104.977214359 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9166666667 20.9669160288 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.25397266985 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221482248369 0.242375264174 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950869236279 0.0925447433944 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814087030785 0.071462118173 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131477906455 0.151781067708 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729712002314 0.0609392437508 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 12.6369458128 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.1260098522 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 55.0591133005 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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