Tobacco is a product made of leaves and numbers of chemical which harms our body. Cigarettes smoking is banned in many nations and organization. I totally agree that adults are using tobacco in the form of cigarettes and the government is investing a huge amount of money to teal the problem but however, some people think that smoking should not be banned but I think it has become very crucial to banned the smoking. I'll discuss both opinions and conclude the reason in this essay.
Firstly, the people who think cigarettes or any types of smoking material should not be banned might be thinking that smoking is such substance which makes people relax and feel out of the world means they are totally tension free. Apart from this because of smoking material like cigarettes and other government are figuring the huge amount of taxes which is dammed good for a nation.
In others hands, the people who are thinking that tobacco and cigarettes must be banned might be thinking that it is not good for health and the community. Because of smoking numbers of people are dying daily and suffering from the disease like kidney and leaver failure. To heal this types of the problem the government is investing huge amounts so that adult people will be out of doom. Thus, if a government could able to do this than, it will not only help to build the nation but the government can also able to decrease the crime rate. However, I also believe that it not only responsibility of government but is also to be aware and suggest of the friend and family members not to smoke.
Thus in conclusion, After studying the Advantages of the smoking ban out wight the disadvantages of smoking because if the adult will be engaged in working rather than smoking, it also helps to increase the tax level of a nation and maintain peace.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: but
...uge amount of money to teal the problem but however, some people think that smoking should ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...ome very crucial to banned the smoking. Ill discuss both opinions and conclude the ...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tensioned'.
Suggestion: tensioned
...out of the world means they are totally tension free. Apart from this because of smokin...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...end and family members not to smoke. Thus in conclusion, After studying the Advan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, thus, apart from, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 10.5418719212 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 8.36945812808 215% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 321.0 242.827586207 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69470404984 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 3.92707691288 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42194157482 2.71678728327 89% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.467289719626 0.580463131201 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 471.6 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.8441387774 50.4703680194 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.583333333 104.977214359 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.75 20.9669160288 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0975282233954 0.242375264174 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0410708497796 0.0925447433944 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0315699495488 0.071462118173 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0674975477594 0.151781067708 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207337150154 0.0609392437508 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 12.6369458128 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 53.1260098522 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 11.5310837438 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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