In town and cities, the large shopping mall should replace the small shop. Do you agree or disagree?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in the small shop and large shopping replace in town and cities. There is widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concern in one’s life. However ,I do not entirely accept this I will explain why in this essay.
There are a number of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that the small shop and large shopping replace in town and cities can not only contributed to discount or offers on branded products in malls people easy buy these products . The product is very beneficial our society but also lead to numerous other benefits in various fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers, not only only can one benefit more when it comes to being effective, but they lives, with much ease , efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merit stand one in good stead, as far as augmenting their chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of the aforementioned proposition is that it is only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied ares. Besides, only When one follows such essential attributes as responsibility, dedication and perseverance. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favor of the small shop and large shopping replace in town and cities.
In view of the arguments outlined above , one can conclude that the benefits of the small shop and large shopping replace in town and cities are indeed too great to ignore.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1251.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 260.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81153846154 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68642413097 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 402.3 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4148657116 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.25 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.25397266985 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318659541382 0.242375264174 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122001484174 0.0925447433944 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.170297234795 0.071462118173 238% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224893737483 0.151781067708 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055132562375 0.0609392437508 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.5310837438 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.