In underdeveloped countries, tourism has disadvantages and can be said the opposite as well. What is your opinion? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in the amount of tourism in the impoverished country, thanks to the extended marketing which allowed foreigners to discover places that were not known. As such, there are both merits and demerits to this trend, although I am of the view that former outdo the latter.
There a myriad of arguments of arguments in favor of my stance. The most conspicuous one is that tourist brings foreign currency, which is spent for basic needs, from food to transport to accommodation to indoor and outdoor activity and what not. Not only tourism creates a deluge of job opportunities for local people, but it also improves the economic conditions of the country. Needless to say, all these benefits stand nation, be it impoverished or affluent, in good stead, as far as augmenting its economy is concerned.
However, there are some pitfalls that can easily overwhelm the potential benefits of tourism in developing nation. The primary concern stems from the fact that it endangers the local sets of cultural and practices. Besides, people from the western country, who come from a whole different level of ethics, will have a negative influence on the youngster from their various acts, from public hugging to kissing to holding hand while walking and what not. Hence, it is apparent why many are not in favor of tourism in developing countries.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that despite some drawbacks, the benefits of tourism in underprivileged countries are indeed too dire to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 263.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0608365019 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76038295056 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600760456274 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4063377446 50.4703680194 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9090909091 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 7.25397266985 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0976122667878 0.242375264174 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0363487127714 0.0925447433944 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329553927437 0.071462118173 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0547053697531 0.151781067708 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020857323295 0.0609392437508 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 77.0 Out of 90
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