One of the major problem faced by the world is the expansion of the urban cities. The recent phenomena in the urbanization has attracted numerous controversies. On one side stands a perspective that cities shall be built vertically rather than horizontally in order to accommodate more number of people in the defined boundaries. This essay will discuss why it is a good idea to build cities vertically.
Ever increasing population has posed a major challenge to the limit to which the cities can be expanded and building high rise apartments is an immediate remedy of this problem. Expanding the cities vertically would prevent exploitation of the nature because today a number of forests are being cut and acres of agriculture farm is being used to build the housing society, business complexes etc. A planned construction in a specified boundary would reduce the deforestation.
The idea of horizontal expansion poses further challenges to the cost of construction as the raw material needs to be transported from factories to the urban construction cities. Also, horizontal expansion leaves little space to build public infrastructures such as roads connecting cities and villages. This is another reason why we should focus on building vertical cities.
In conclusion, as the population continues to climb up we need to build taller cities. This essay discussed how vertical cities can solve the environmental problems and results in better public infrastructure. Clearly, building vertical cities is a smart move.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 20.9802955665 38% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 240.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37916666667 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11468018244 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5875 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1519375005 50.4703680194 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3076923077 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4615384615 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76923076923 7.25397266985 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230380594396 0.242375264174 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807560682276 0.0925447433944 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044866374867 0.071462118173 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140529183929 0.151781067708 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420768932766 0.0609392437508 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.