What are the benefits of living in big cities, as opposed to rural areas? What are the problems of rural areas and how can they be solved
Undoubtedly, enormous issues occurred for the people living in the rural areas whereas they do not face any problem while residing in city instead they get tremendous benefits of living in cities. In this essay, I will discuss what kind of problems is faced by people while living in outskirt areas, and how these can be solved. I will also explain positive aspects of living in urban cities.
Firstly, Medical facilities are better in the cities comparable to rural areas. The treatment of chronic diseases such as cancer, TB and other diseases is far better in the hospital of cities than of rural areas. It is because medical practitioners, who are in rural areas, are migrated to cities for the betterment of their career. Therefore, it is believed that staying in cities is better than outskirt areas.
Secondly, education is also an important aspect for people. Without the weapon of education, it will be arduous for them to solve complex problems. Therefore, people tend to move to cities because they get good education owing to availability of experts in cities; such education enables them to win in competitions. In rural areas, experts do not believe to stay; therefore, the pupils do not acquire academics education which is required to compete with rivals.
However, there are several solutions to solve education and medical issues in the rural areas. For this, the government may spend hefty sum of money to improve medical and academic institutions, and Fringe benefits may be given by the government to the doctors and teachers so that they could stay in the rural areas.
In my opinion, local governments must ponder on this issue so that these problems could easily be resolved.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, while, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 284.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04929577465 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61884734878 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521126760563 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 455.4 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5782920832 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.428571429 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.25397266985 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277347919951 0.242375264174 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880205152518 0.0925447433944 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747528772969 0.071462118173 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143080631779 0.151781067708 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113322406055 0.0609392437508 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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