What are the pros and cons of extreme sports?
No doubt sports are very beneficial for us but, it is well said that everything in excess is bad for us weather it can be anything. similarly sports at extreme level also have its advantages as well as disadvantages. before concluding the above statementI i, willl first discuss about iits pros and cons. The advantages of extreme sports are they are good for are health as we play sports our muscles and bones become strong. Our mind become more active,moreover retaining power of individual also increase .It should be also introduced iin the schools as children become aware about the sports. On the other hand iit also have disadvantages like when we play sports at extreme level we cant concentrate on anythiing else in case of children they forge about theiir studies and focus only on sports. In conclusion we cant thiink about its advanges but also we have to focus on its disadvanges.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, moreover, similarly, so, well, in conclusion, no doubt, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 31.9359605911 63% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 740.0 1207.87684729 61% => OK
No of words: 154.0 242.827586207 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80519480519 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.92707691288 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70899876573 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 139.433497537 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616883116883 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 379.143842365 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7636693986 50.4703680194 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.714285714 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.7142857143 7.25397266985 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.12807881773 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156876709709 0.242375264174 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821059784724 0.0925447433944 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700396695832 0.071462118173 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156876709709 0.151781067708 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0609392437508 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.5310837438 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.32886699507 89% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 55.0591133005 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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