What are some of the Pros and Cons of extreme/adventure sports?
Choose which position you most agree with and discuss why you chose that position. Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading
Some people believe that adventure sports have many advatages to them while others feel that it has several drawbacks. In my point of view, the benefits of this kind of activity are thrilling and rejuvenating and the downside of it are being dangerous and expensive. This essay will discuss my justifications for the stated reasons.
To begin with, the event of a person's life when he pursues to engage in extreme sports are positively abundant. These adventurous individuals may feel great satisfaction and sense of fulfillment if they are able to successfully finish their goals. To illustrate, certain sports such as bungee jumping and sky diving provides thrill and excitement to the person and once safely completed will also revitalize his energy and bring out fresh perspective in him. Hence, these ventures are without a doubt positive pursuits to any highly spirited humans.
On the other, people who are involve to risky undertakings may potentially harm themselves. Extreme sports is for a fact hazardous activity to accomplish. Consequently, physically active people are prone to accidents and may possibly have temporary to permanent injuries if handled unsafely. Moreover, these activities require expensive equipment and facilities to fully enjoy the experience that ordinary people cannot afford. Therefore, adventure events may demand countless of requirements that people hardly fulfills to avoid danger.
To recapitulate, the moment of enjoying life to the fullest comes with a price in doing extreme sports. This have some positive outcomes to people but the disadvantages far outweighs it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...asons. To begin with, the event of a persons life when he pursues to engage in extre...
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Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
...rtain sports such as bungee jumping and sky diving provides thrill and excitement to the p...
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Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...pirited humans. On the other, people who are involve to risky undertakings may poten...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'involved'.
Suggestion: involved
...humans. On the other, people who are involve to risky undertakings may potentially h...
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Message: Use simply 'may', 'possibly'.
Suggestion: may; possibly
...ctive people are prone to accidents and may possibly have temporary to permanent injuries if...
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Message: Use simply 'may'.
Suggestion: may
...ctive people are prone to accidents and may possibly have temporary to permanent injuries if...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ensive equipment and facilities to fully enjoy the experience that ordinary peopl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, kind of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 250.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92939857309 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9545363264 50.4703680194 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8571428571 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.25397266985 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118693162602 0.242375264174 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412296701381 0.0925447433944 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363729178004 0.071462118173 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0750787345948 0.151781067708 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276715458693 0.0609392437508 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 53.1260098522 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 55.0591133005 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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