The invention is one of the very crucial changes in people life because It makes people updated and they find very comfortable changes in the life. There are many invention or discovery since people become civilian but in the last hundred years, some scientist changes the world by inventing antibiotic, the airplane and the computer. All of them are a very crucial instrument and medicine but mooting abuts an invention is the computer. I will explain my reason to support my essay throughout the essay.
Firstly, the computer is such an electronic machine which helps people to calculate and save the data of any things. It has made people life very easier and convenient in business, office, hospital, etc… due to which people don’t need to carry huge stuff alone with them anywhere. It’s also helpful to student and scientist or researcher to collect the data from anywhere. Nowadays, most of the instrument like Airbus, train, ship, etc… are operate with the help of people and because the computer other mini gadgets like mobile, telephone, wifi, etc. are launched.
However, I also believe that airplane and antibiotic i.e. medicine and science technology have also played the very vital role in the life of people. The invention of medicine helps people to be cure from different diseases and virus, whereas invention of science help human being to know about the world and universe. For example; airplane helps people to reach throughout the world easily but without Airbus, it was quite difficult to travel around the world.
Therefore, I believe that there is the equal proportion of each invention but again I’ll say that computer has become technology at anywhere or any invention.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 76, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
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Line 1, column 158, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun invention seems to be countable; consider using: 'many inventions'.
Suggestion: many inventions
...fortable changes in the life. There are many invention or discovery in since people become civ...
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Line 2, column 444, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'operated'.
Suggestion: operated
...ment like airbus, train, ship, etc… are operate with the help of people and because the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, whereas, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 8.36945812808 215% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 271.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16974169742 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52856126902 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568265682657 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4130783645 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.75 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.25397266985 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0994537457355 0.242375264174 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0366590679345 0.0925447433944 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464208012238 0.071462118173 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0605574165211 0.151781067708 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538417961022 0.0609392437508 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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